Bismil:
sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai.
dekhnaa hai zor kitnaa baazuve kaatil mein hai
waqt aane pe bataadenge tujhe ae aasmaan
hum abhi se kyaa bataaye kyaa hamaare dil mein hai
Piyush Mishra:
o re bismil kaash aate aaj tum hindustaan
dekhte ki mulk saara kyaa tashan kyaa chill mein hai
aaj kaa laundaa yeh kehtaa hum to bismil thak gaye
apni aazaadi to bhaiyaa laundiyaa ke til mein hai.
aaj ke jalson mein bismil ek gungaa gaa raha.
aur behron kaa wo relaa naachtaa mehfil mein hai
haath ki khaadi banaane kaa zamaana lag gayaa
aaj to chaddi bhi silti englison ki mill mein hai
Apoorva Dixit:
dekh bismil gareeb bharat hai tujhe bula raha
yahan toh paisa magar amiron ki khujli mein hai
kaunse yuvak ko hum jagaayein yahan bhala
uski nind toh bus drugs aur sleeping pill mein hai
Sushant Singh Rathod:
wo jaag kar kya karega jab zamana so raha
tujhse ye iltaza hai Bismil ko bhai na bula
dekhna hai sach to tu apne hi aankhon dekh le
aaj ki generation ka sach to tere fone ke bill mein hai
dekhna hai zor kitnaa baazuve kaatil mein hai
waqt aane pe bataadenge tujhe ae aasmaan
hum abhi se kyaa bataaye kyaa hamaare dil mein hai
sarfaroshi ki tamannaa ab hamaare dil mein hai.
Apoorva
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Good one bro!!!
ReplyDeleteGood one bro!!!
ReplyDeletethanks man..
ReplyDeletei just wrote 4 lines towards the end.. the stanza that is mis-aligned is mine..
so realistic....i think this is the only pragmatic poem i am reading after...'dekh tere sansar ke halat kya ho gai bhagva..'
ReplyDeletewait for 3 or 4 years.desh ko sudhaarne ka josh poora uthar jaayega.
ReplyDeletehaan.. shayad desh sudhar chuka hoga.. haha..
ReplyDeleteits a good work. i must say. what Bismil wrote was motivational,what Piyush Mishra wrote is showing the current status.and what you two have written indicates ur pessimistic view towards the future.great work in fact.u hv all the rights in this world to become pessimists or cynics or anything. ohh!!!! about desh ko sudharna thing...i agree ye josh to utar jaata hai.but i dont think u want to do that with this piece of work. i m glad that u r so popular that people post comments without actually understanding what u have written.
ReplyDeletetoh desh ka present n future situation bataana jus timepass ke liye tha kya....sorry...i misunderstood tum sudhaarna chahte ho....its good work.
ReplyDeleteThanks for appreciating guys,i just added 4 lines to the song of Gulal.. all the lyrics of that film is worth reading.. pretty creative.. and the dark characters of the movie were portrayed beautifully.. have become fan of Anurag Kashyap (its late,but better late than never).. check out his blog
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superb improvisation....
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